The meal Alexis talked about was Thanksgiving. Alexis ate turkey, mashed potatoes, corn, stuffing, and her mothers dessert. Alexis had her thanksgiving meal at her grandmothers. Her mother, father, brother, uncles, aunts, and cousins were all there.

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Surprisingly, new research suggests that chocolate is actually causing people to lose weight.  Studies has shown that people that eat chocolate more often than those that do not have lower body mass indexes. Chocolate has also been linked to lower heart disease.

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Looking back from my past experiences I can tell that I was not like most children.A bloody knfie at my eye level ( age three) I remember Mom and Dad by the hand, running. I remember sitting behind a pegboard desk in the middle of the living room thinking it was a step up from the storefront flat. I also remember being the shortest person on street corners, and no one asking where his Mommy is.

If you cannot relate then you cannot truely understand the topic at hand,  which makes it hard to have an opinion about something, making it difficult to write.

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